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para brythatguy : I greatly desire to work with you. If not a writer, then maybe I could assist with editing and fine tuning your work?  For example, Kate 17, "Kate Got Fucked in a Packing Lot in a Car."  'Parking' Lot is misspelled.  It may be smoother to say, "Kate got fucked in a car in a parking lot."  Little things like this should be reviewed before entering the final work. The entire game is amazing and deserves a nice final touch. It's too good to publish with these small but obvious errors. Again, I would love the opportunity to help with this work and future masterpieces.      Brian 'Bry'  
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Whats the game
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Nice
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